I couldn't even get the title to stick.
So, Back to the drawing board....again.
New character... Peter Fitzpatrick... it has to be a three syllable surname... don't ask me why... just sounds better. New Title... Leaving it All.. but that may well change. But I have managed to keep the central theme.... I hope...otherwise this story won't happen. Sorry, Denise! I am a little more hopeful of a successful outcome this time however.
Time will tell.
This is a tiny snippet;
But later that evening, after his solitary meal at the same small locando, when he returned to the hotel he went down to the bar for the first time, and got a fresh lemonade and took it outside to sit on the wide patio overlooking the bay. She was there. He could see the flame of her hair, darker now in the reddening sunlight as dusk approached. She had her back to him, and he watched her for a while, noting the elegant curve of her shoulders, her slender neck, the curl of her hair....... he finished his drink and went upstairs to read his book on the balcony in the cool of the evening.
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Oh and by the way. and TIWF members - recent posts... naked Virgil? read Virgil Tracy One Hour. You might (just might) like it. But there again. It written by me - so you probably won't. :-)