Punctuation was never my strong point!
Now that Lines of Communication is complete and posted, I can finish AfterMath, which has got increasingly harder to do as I kill characters off!
It's been quite difficult trying to get it all to fit together, and the version that is on the SHADO Writers' Forum is not the final one. I think I will probably do more tinkering with it once it's 'finished', and I would also like to do some sketches of Janus, or at least the control room!
Still, there is another Challenge waiting, and I have a fairly good idea of where I will go with that one!